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Re: 'til vs. Till
Go 'til! You will rule the world! WORLD DOMINATION!!!
Jun 21, 2008 -
Re: Waiting to Mend
I’ll cry these tears and hope Hope that my screams will reach your ears That you will come to save me Is it possible to die of a broken heart? ...
May 1, 2008 -
Re: The Gate of Glendon- Chapters 3 & 4
I liked it a lot. It was confusing though between the chapters where one is in someone's POV and another is someone else's. I think it would be better if ...
May 1, 2008 -
Re: The Eclipse Chronicles Prolouge/Chapter 1/2
I really liked it! :D It was a good start to a story that pulls people in... Or at least me. There was some grammar mistakes in it but not ...
May 1, 2008 -
Re: Unloved- Chapter 2 Dilemma (edited)
I think the last sentence just confused me... "First impressions were usually wrong, but I don’t know about my feelings for Chase though." I'm not sure... Just something about the ...
Apr 30, 2008 -
Re: Unloved- Chapter 1 Savior (edited)
You've probably heard this from others but some of the sentences are confusing. Just thought I'd point it out. But I like the story so far! :D
Apr 30, 2008 -
Re: The Freedom to Choose: Prologue and Chapter One
Prologue: The girl grabbed the branch of the tree and swung herself up so she could sit on it. “Come on!” she yelled blowing her brown bangs out of her ...
Apr 30, 2008 -
Re: When they need her
The story is good so far. It had grammar mistakes but so far good. :D
Apr 30, 2008 -
Re: Nightshine - chapter 1
Hmm... This was good I liked Mr. McFowen and how it seemed he knew something was going to happen. There's not much of a problem in this story other than ...
Apr 29, 2008 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
Hi I'm Monica known as Red Panda-Chan... I like to write... I guess you would know that because that's why I'm here. This place seems cool, I have a Deviant ...
Apr 29, 2008
